Words do matter.

Our lives begin to end the day we become silent
about things that matter~ martin luther king
Words heal..
Words reassure..
Words express...

#5 A girl

(Contribution for the cause- Save the girl child!)

We born as a father’s dream
Mothers hope, a new lights beam
Sibling’s friend and secret holder
Advisor and guide as we grow older
Our tolerance is tested at every step
Our ways are full of thorns and whips
Victims of several shameful incidents
We are treated like worthless residents
We fear getting out after dusk
In every field we are separated like husk
They are unaware we have the power
To move mountains and stop rivers any hour
We have dived in marina trench, invaded space
Scaled Mount Everest, won every race
We are worshipped as goddess
Our presence is counted as priceless
Whole humanity took birth from our womb
Now this humanity us pushing us to doom
Murdering us will affect your fate, Beware

15 Opinions:

Om my god!!Beautiful words..
I am thinkng to write someday regarding Feminism,abusement..
Then surely I am going to link this..


very awesome..!!! can't agree with you more...!!



An honest poetic work,which echoes the pain that girls face,especially in our country which is named after a mata too... So often we witness the prejudice,even I have seen the sidelining and partial treatment of girls even amongst most educated of families and societies... Great and touching work,keep them coming...:)



@neeha- girls have suffered a lot and this problem needs a huge attention, maybe then it'll be a safe place to live.

@dhawal- regards.

@karthik- thanku.


yeah emotions with a social message.... great going yaar..nice poem


Powerful poem with a powerful message.

My potluck is here: SHEDDING


Sounds so feministic... But isn't it true that all girls are feminists? Just kidding.. Another great poem.. ;)


strong words,strong emotions....its very very sad to know that people have forgotten " Yatra naryastu poojyante ramante tatra devataha : Where women are worshipped there the Gods reside."...its a very nice piece...good job done...kudos to you


thank you.. ur words inspire and let me know that it wasn't a waste after all. thanku


Hey deepika... touching words
may be this reaches to those ppl who are against the birth of baby girls and inspire them in some manner!


^i would be happiest person if this could be the reason of one less female foeticide..


Beautifully written...kudos to you!!


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