Words do matter.

Our lives begin to end the day we become silent
about things that matter~ martin luther king
Words heal..
Words reassure..
Words express...

#20 Deafening silence




Time has taken away the silent whimpers
Nagging presence of constant whispers

Deafening silence growling since forever
Fear and laughter existing together

Of shrieking sighs and suppressed cries
Silence is all in those mourning eyes

Silence is all, which floats to and fro
Mystifying reality of merciless truths

Expression out loud is a forgotten history
Fake smiles clutching unsolved mystery

Thousand words stuck in throat, helpless
Denying to betray their beastly mistress

Silence is artful,
If conceived it rhymes
If brushed off its nothing,
If penetrated can kill
Silence is pure
Silence is bliss

Speech of incoherent
Sanity of the fool
Bravery of the coward
Silence is nothing
Silence is all

Silence is all being heard
Silence is all being felt
Wish there was a place where
Silence could be attained, understood and said...






76 Opinions:

OMG! Deepika, one of your best works... I mean,
"Silence is artful,
If conceived it rhymes
If brushed off its nothing,
If penetrated can kill
Silence is pure
Silence is bliss"

You have draped Silence in the best dress,I have ever seen it wear...:) So articulate!! Beautiful!! KUDOS!! :)

 

Wow..nice comeback !

At times solitude and silence is all that is required..hope there was a place where you could be and no one disturbed you!

Nice poem...

Take Care.

 

beautifully silent in its own charismatic way.

 

Beautiful piece of work by you....
"There are times when silence has the loudest voice"....

 

Solitude is often prejudice to darkness and sadness. My solitude is always high and maddening. :P
Anyways a wonderful write up Deepika.

 

so many awesome expressions there Deepika...
some very mature ideas voiced...
if this is the result of silence...it kinda suits you:-)

 

Hey Deepika,

very nice and deep poem.

At times silence speaks louder than words but your are right if brushed off it is nothing. However, silence is a powerfull tool of communication and it can give many messages. Power of silence can be mightier than power of spoken words.

 

Silence does indeed have many voices.
Very well done!

 

Hi Deeps,

You are back! :)

And what amazing words Deeps! The silence which we all have inside evenif it gets supressed under the noise of the constant chaos of our day to day life. Rarely the silence conveys its real meaning to the world. Why does a baby stops crying immediately when she cuddles up to her mom? It's her mother's silent heartbeats she hears close to her ears which soothes her. Silence is a bliss.

Amazing piece of writing Deeps. I loved the closing lines..
"Silence is all being heard. Silence is all being felt. Wish there was a place where Silence could be attained, understood and said..."

That place lies in your heart.

Love
Deeds

 

Hey, Hi

so finally after a long time, you are back!! i see the break has matured your words. Nice.

Silence, all that could be said about it is penned here...

Silence is an armour,
and at times the sword,
silence is what divides,
beauty from words...


beautifully expressed, and i can say, the wait has been worthwhile.


Regards,
The Silhouette...

 

Wow!...
Beautiful poem <3

 

'silence is artful, if conceived it rhymes'. beautiful lines!
this one was a profound work..even i cherish those silent moments a lo, after all in a busy life like ours..its very difficult to have them :)
good wrk!

Sarah

 

silence is loud, silence is strong, silence is hope n yes it is artful...:).....lovely post...:)

 

Superb way to express silent ! Loved it.

 

Very beautifully written!!

 

Silence is golden + your soothing words are mindblowing. Deepika you rally have terrific talent.

 

the power of silence~! nice thoughts

 

The only place where silence is understood without saying a word has to be in arms of the loved. It could be any form of love though.

cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

 

great expressions....

at times silence speaks more than words....silence can bring in great thoughts....aisey bhi har waqt kuch bolna jaruri nahi hota....

nice effort as the topic as well as presentation is superb... keep it up....

 

Silence is all in those mourning eyes. now this was eloquent. so was the rest of the work. :)

strange, one moment i read the name of the blog to be words do matter and the next i am reading a poem on silence. and a pretty damn good one.

btw u r right. words do matter. as of now more than god.

keeep writing.

 

B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L!
The best was :
"Silence is artful,If conceived it rhymesIf brushed off its nothing,If penetrated can killSilence is pureSilence is bliss"
a note here, not only when it is conceived that it rhymes, but also when interpreted by ther right for the right :)

 

Very lovely poem, silence is very powerful , yet too much of it can make you go mad! I think the real silence, which would be attained understood and felt would be when we close our eyes for the last time. Great words!

 

thats an awesome poem ..

deepika.http://us.i1.yimg.com/us.yimg.com/i/mesg/emoticons7/24.gif

 

y so sad again..?? beautiful composition though...!!!

 

Deepika,

"Silence is artful,
If conceived it rhymes
If brushed off its nothing,
If penetrated can kill
Silence is pure
Silence is bliss"


How can I comment silently? Actually I am.. No words Deepika, when it comes to Poetry, you are awesome.. Hats of to this work..

Someone is Special

 

excellent...was reading yesterday that the chinese have 600 forms of silence and only a select few can interpret each kind...so much said in the silence...very very nice...

 

A real wonderful piece of work!
Kudos to you for composing such a lovely poem! :

 

Loved it..!! i believe that silence is a powerful expression.something that is mightier.

 

Wow! Deafening silence. Silence can be so powerful.
http://judyidliketosay.blogspot.com/2011/05/last-scene.html

 

I love silence, so enjoyed this poem which describes it so well.

 

What can be better than silence being understood...thats true love.

 

Deepu..I am just speechless.speechless...silent.
You know how much I loved it..

 

Deepika,

Silence says so much!

Eileen

 

Some poetry I need to read and read and read...
Silence is Deafening but I hear you very clear.
Very nicely done!
Genebrother

 

amazin poem, silence is everythin if interpreted correctly, n its nuthin if misunderstud.

http://collected-cryptics.blogspot.com/2010/05/resurrected-soul.html

 

well i am all for silence but in todays world its not right.. SPEAK up is the new motto


Bikram's

 

Karthik- best?.. Maybe.. anyways. good to see you here.

Fatima- :)

Rachit- good to see you here :)

irfanuddin- Yes, and such times its overlooked by the people its intended to.

prateek- I am finally replying :P. sorry for the delay. Wah! high... hmmm. good for you :P

Mayank- thanks for coming.

suruchi- :) good to here that. But if I go silent who would comment on your tumbling thoughts? ;)

always happy- you're right. silence is mighter than words... thanks for coming here.

andy- :)

sm- thanks for coming.

A- :)

Archana(deeds)- wow... i love you for such a long, sweet and lovable comment. You took my heart with your words deeds... :D love you!

Eon heath- :) thats was all i wanted to hear.

valli- :)

sarah- I don't think its difficult to have them. Just sitand u you have it...

Vaisakhi- silence is loud.. if ears hearing are sensitive enough.

mukesh- thakns for the visit.

vyankatesh- :)

Sush- Thank you so much for the kind words.

Sanjeevkmenon- thank you

Anshul- yes, rightly said.

Anuj- thank you for the visit anuj. :)

Raj- thank you for coming here.. i appreciate it. :)

4 those who care- Yes., when interpreted, the needed reaction is achieved.

ashwini- truely said.. the real silence is before the soul departs...

anuradha- i guess, there wasn't any thing to ROFL.

Dhawal- na, not sad.

sis- Thats too much to hear from a writer like yourself sis...

brian miler- i am glad u actually liked it.. means a lot to me

Engima- :)

Devil incarnate- yes, nighter than words sometimes.

Judy roney- yes.. many a times silence can be powerful..

Sherry blue sky- I am glad.. you could relate.

alka gurha- true relation indeed.

Madhukul- i love you for coming here :*

eileen T o'neill- silence says much more.

Ria- thanks for the visit.

Genebrother- I am honoured.. thanks a lot for coming here... :)

devilzangel- thats true.

Bikram- speak up sometimes won' help.

lunawitch15- :)

 

Silence kills, silence makes, unheard and unsaid louder... :) :)
Lovely lines deepu :) :)

Cheers,

 

Powerfully written - so many ways to interpret the power of silence ... nicely done! ;)

 

Understood and masterfully said. Great skill, line development, rhyme schemes, meter, flow, content, word choices. Very mature presentation that sucks the reader in. You owned me. That is skill.

 

lovely take on silence, Thanks for sharing.

A++

 

beautiful words deepika!:)
im in love with your poetry:)
you express so beautifully!
keep writing!
you rock!

 

The silence here speaks volumes! the poem is beautiful and well written and the rhymes are perfect. "Silence is all in those mourning eyes"-so poetic!

 

the last para rocks, never saw silence telling so many things.heeeyy 50th comment naa..cool :)

 

Well said..a great poem.. well place is always known..but we fear to step in...

 

I loved the review of your poetry...at Jingle's.. and decided to visit..and felt nice to see someone young having such depth..

I will like you to visit

http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2011/01/where-am-i.html

http://rameshsood.blogspot.com/2010/12/slice-me-deep.html

I look forward to meeting you on my page...

 

Sometimes the spoken words have no power to express, but the silence has.

I have always loved silence.

Silence is all, and we always wait for the one who can understand it, more over I can say feel it too.

Your words said it all! Beautiful Deepika :)

 

Whoa Whoa Whoa!!

Well, Deepika its not a secret that you are amazing at poems. But i loved this one.

When i say i loved it, means i loved it more than any of your work. Conflicting real emotions about silence pouring through and through. Forces me to think...and thats a huge accomplishment. B-)

Keep it up!! *pats your back*

Love,
Devils!!

 

I have always believed that the value of silence is attributed to the loudness around.

Silence is salient,
to the ears that have fared
the fort of volume,
no to the one's that gave in to
the sleuth of whispers.

 

I enjoyed the contradictions within the write but silence itself is indeed contradictory :)

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And sometimes silence has the loudest voice. Beautiful play of words.

 

I always enjoyed reading your poem.
Great poem dear.

 

there are times when silence is simply INvaluable :)

 

the eloquent silence...superb piece of writing....you write great!!

 

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Silence can say and leave so many things unsaid...i crave for silence amidst the crowd....
beauty in verse, conveyed so expressively....

 

Deepika,

You put the famous saying Speech is silver but silence is gold, so beautifully.

Take care

 

Deepu..ya am uninterested..dont u dare say that to me again!!!
Welcome back...Hugs!!!!!!!!
Am in love with your work..you write so true and magical hun!!!
Am missing u..fb ym?kaha kab?

 

w-o-w! u r an artist gurl !
Firstly Welcome Back to IF =DD
I Loved the poem, very deep thoughts u have encompassed within these very few words, why thts the beauty of poetry and u have showcased ur talent so well..I truly applaud this very spell-binding attempt of yours to define silence and its effect, its necessity and its value.

Truly amazing hun
Do write more n do PM me..

Luv
ZeeJay ! =)

 

welcome back girl...*hug*
How hav u been? missed u so much re...FB pe bhi nahi aati tu.
Ok now coming to ur Poem...wat a fantastic display of emotions yaar, mind blowing. Since wen hav u bcm a poet? Tu to FFs likhti thi...:-O
But anyway, this piece of work is just awesome blossom. Keep writing more.:D

 

u have a great knack of telling a story,which carries emotions more brilliantly..i hope u write stories or posts more often.....lot of poems off late..................really loved ur stories.............very good story telling

 

The power of silence could not be told better.

 

Very Nice Line. I'll try to follow

 

Oh wow I love this! I agree with Sounds of Subtlety that is a brilliant stanza and this is my favorite too!

 

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